Thursday, September 9, 2021

Track race

 We were learning about writing a descriptive writing about running on the race track. We also learned about leveling up by putting mote into our slides to explain more about our writing. Also we learned about writing a piece of writing about you on the track trying to beat the other people. The most thing that we learned about is making sure our writing makes sense and also making sure there is no mistakes in our writing.

I found it easy to publishing my writing  onto a google slide. I've also found it easy to finding a pastel and flower background to go with my words. And the most easiest thing for me is separating the paragraphs into separate slides so my writing can fit more on the google sides.

I found it hard to thinking of what I should write about and putting more descriptive words into my writing. I've asl found it hard to describing myself in the race and also describing the other people racing with me.

Next time I practise on thinking of what I should write about and practise on putting my descriptive words into my writing.

Monday, September 6, 2021

Descriptive writing

We were learning about writing a descriptive writing about someone that is special; to you. We also learned about making our writing descriptive and more attractive for those people who likes reading. We learned about putting more descriptive words and Adjectives into our writing to make our writing less boring and more popping. 

I fund it easy to thinking of what kind of person I should do for this writing session. I've also found it easy to finding good background like watercress to go with my writing and finding it easy to pronounce a maori word with the english word beside it to let you know what the word was.

I found it hard to putting more descriptive words into my writing and I've also found it hard to thinking of some descriptive words to describe my papa.

Next time will practise on thinking or brainstorming some descriptive words to put in my writing.