We were learning about writing a piece of writing about our bubble in lockdown. In my bubble it was really boring but the best part was playing tackle rugby with my brother I really loved playing tackle rugby with my brother because I always win and he can't tackle me over. We also learned about doing our writing more exciting for those people that are reading it and also making our writing less boring incase the reader falls asleep.
I found it easy to finding a background and doing the correct spelling. I've also found it easy to getting the white highlight onto my writing to make my writing more seeable for those readers to see my writing probably. I think the most easiest was writing my bubble recount on a google doc.
I found it hard to thinking of what I should write about my bubble experience. I've also found it hard to making my writing more descriptive and making my writing more amazing for the people to make them want to read my writing.
Next time I will think harder on thinking of what to write about and making my writing my descriptive.
A great account of Bubble Life at your house Cassidy. Your use of onomatopoeia adds interest for the reader. Next time you might like to add more description about how you feel. Were you happy, sad, annoyed?
ReplyDeleteThan you Mrs Gomm for commenting onto my blog. And yes next time I will add more description about how I feel.
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